| 2004-10-21 17:06:29 |
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Another well-written story. Goes to show that good porn doesn't have to be semi-literate |
| 2004-10-30 17:46:47 |
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Very nice |
| 2004-10-30 20:35:09 |
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what the fuck. I mean sure the story was good but jesus motha fuckin christ did it have to be so fuckin long? |
| 2004-11-02 10:43:51 |
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the story is cool but it must have a sequel.I hope the follow up is as good as this one |
| 2004-11-03 01:44:14 |
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Well it was a nice peice of literature, even if it must be porn. Yes the story was long for the average person, but I liked it that way as it gave for character development. Congratulations on a wonderful peice of work, and I hope to see a sequel. |