| 2004-11-06 00:43:06 |
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a very nice storey and dont listen to the idiots who say shit about it being too long. a storey is as long as it has to be, and if it has to be really long then thats the way its supposed to be written. |
| 2004-11-07 19:22:40 |
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thank god finally somevody can spell things correctly |
| 2004-11-10 09:02:47 |
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Wouldnt you rather have a storie with detail and long then one that is short and just says stupid crap.I liked speccily the tampon part.I also like how you made it so that one of the girls didnt like it is more beliviable that way. |
| 2004-12-12 13:57:27 |
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don't listen to any criticizm on this one, some people would complain about waking up to a blowjob (the story isn't quite that good, but then, what is?) |
| 2004-12-18 15:51:46 |
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great story. don't listen to the "too long" comments. the longer the more interesting. also i'm glad someone can spell. good job. i just wish you had a scene with a blowjob in it. |