2005-02-20 21:12:25 |
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i give it a 69/69 ! haha |
2005-02-21 18:48:33 |
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very good story. your grammar, spelling, and vocabulary is impressive. It's good to see a person that's not an idiot writing these stories. Keep writing. thank you. |
2005-02-23 00:16:10 |
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best story ive ever read in my whole life perfect grammar perfectly set and all out incredible u rock! |
2005-02-24 18:07:06 |
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pretty dam good. u r one lucky guy. but dirk diggler is kinda right some parts i am not buying. overall excellent, 10/10 |
2005-02-25 22:43:22 |
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This story was awesome. Hey Dirk, My girlfriend came the first time. It did hurt like hell but she did come too.
Great story man, I really enjoyed it. |