| 2005-02-14 20:37:30 |
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agree with dirk, been there, done that, 4/10 is tops |
| 2005-02-14 22:02:03 |
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dont let these fuckers get to you man this story kicked ass. 11/10 |
| 2005-02-15 22:34:49 |
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not bad. the only glitch is that she didnt hurt. it always hurts the first time. but i like it nevertheless. 8/10 |
| 2005-02-18 03:26:32 |
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that was a great story, just keep writing!!! 10/10 |
| 2005-02-20 11:10:12 |
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Great story! Excellently written, great characters, very tender and believable. Kudos! |