| 2005-12-11 17:25:03 |
|
we all can dream. I agree with Shade, sweet and cute. keep writing. |
| 2005-12-13 01:38:13 |
|
I suck my dogs hairy balls.... Yummmm i love it!!!! |
| 2005-12-14 18:57:12 |
|
10/10. Exciting, literate, believable. I think even women would like it. Do some more as soon as you stop hyperventilating. |
| 2005-12-22 05:48:26 |
|
Whoever that asshole is who signs my name to his inane babbling, just remember it isn't me --- the real Original Oogman. This was a beautiful story. .
I reminded me of my youth, with one exception: My first real fucking experience was with a girl 2 years older than me. I was 15. And I popped my load the minute my dick touched her slippery pussy. That's what first-timers do. They don't fuck like an experienced man. The writers of these stories need to pay attention to such details.
But this story is definitely worth a 9/10 |
| 2005-12-31 10:00:49 |
|
Lovely storie but that girl is a slut ! so 7/10 |