| 2006-06-20 10:26:04 |
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great story 10/10 where is the blowjob tho? |
| 2006-06-26 04:45:14 |
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Damn Man Great Fucking Story Do You Have Any Others...?? |
| 2006-07-01 06:55:08 |
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very good, though lacking in forplay before the actual sex itself. mybe he could have fingered her or eaten her out, and she could have given him a blowjob. aside from that. brilliant. romantic and sexy.
good job! |
| 2006-07-17 11:53:45 |
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it was good... but... the fucking sceene was to short!!! but... i liked it in a way,,, |
| 2006-07-18 02:57:10 |
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I completely loved this story! You're a great writer. |