| 2007-01-17 19:18:24 |
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good story |
| 2007-01-21 20:25:43 |
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thats a grate story |
| 2007-01-21 21:57:58 |
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man thats a grate story i just read it agin thats good i hope u make part 2 |
| 2007-02-06 12:37:47 |
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U suck i am julie's father how the hell u cam have sex with my daughter i am gonna report it to the police and gonna insult u in fornt of the whole school tommorow and i am gonna make it sure than everybody in the school knows about u u fuckin bitch iwill murder u bastard why the hell did u fuck my daughter if i say i fucked ur mom how will u feel the same way i feel it for my daughter u motherfucket |
| 2007-02-07 03:01:37 |
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Boy ! Not only good but realistically written.
You are a prolific writer, I haven't read any of your other stories, but if they're all as good as this - I'm in for a treat.
9/10 - but only because it can always be better, though I'm not sure how ! |