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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-09 11:04:25 | Surfside chapter four | Another great chapter. I see my note about paragraph spacings after ch2 was unnecessary. I should have looked ahead, sorry. Great writing and now easier to read. Question - I see you're from UK. Do people there normally spell waist as waste? I've seen this spelling a few other times and wonder if they were all writers from England? |
| 2004-11-09 11:39:41 | Surfside chapter four | To Jon-J...no its a misspelling. Typing too fast when writing and my hands and brain werent connected mate. I must do a spell check on all 11 chapters oneday...thanks for the feedback. |
| 2004-12-13 09:37:00 | Surfside chapter four | Hey keith your stories are great but im from Australia and most of these readers are from the US so unless im very much mistaken a brassiere is a bra right? It's kinda weird and i was wondering whether you might change that in any future stories you write.... |
| 2005-01-30 11:51:53 | Surfside chapter four | To the Sock Man People in the US say bra too, don't worry. I mean, I'm a girl, I should know. Keith just writes brassiere to make it even more exciting. and if you know what it is, then there's no need to change it. l8r |
| 2005-09-18 04:12:27 | Surfside chapter four | Seriously, Titman, why don't you put out the effort to turn one of your scenarios into an actual story? You have enough ideas; you post them in comments all over this damn board. On the other hand, if your story will be one giant run-on sentence, like your comments, maybe you shouldn't bother. |