| 2004-10-30 15:10:07 |
Surfside chapter five
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hey fuzzynutz something must be wrong with your computer or eyes because chapter four is posted big as day Keith i thought i'd handle this question for you because we need you to use your time posting chapters and remember voyuerism GREAT STORY |
| 2004-10-31 06:37:05 |
Surfside chapter five
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This one is more along my line... ass-licking and sodomy. Other four chapters were very good but this one is more my style! |
| 2004-10-31 15:46:26 |
Surfside chapter five
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hey keith this is just meant to be constructive critisizism your best surfside chapter was two.The stuff was great when there was interaction betweenCheryl and Kevin please get back to them teasing and watching each other '''cause remember without the incest and voyuerism it's just another story and does'nt stand out from all the rest just remember voyuerism' incest and again keep em cumming no pun intended |
| 2004-10-31 21:40:18 |
Surfside chapter five
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Hey dude don't fall asleep while your'e on top '''bring out part six''' did you fall asleep on the throne ''or has celebrity statis gone to your head and made you kind of lazy'' remember'''incest'''voyueri... and add to something that's working 'namely Cheryl and Kevin don't subtract them they're your stories foundation |
| 2004-10-31 22:35:43 |
Surfside chapter five
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Hey Titman, I wrote this back in 1999. I'm posting it a chapter every other day or so. Chapters 6 and 7 were submitted today. I'm working on an incest, voyeurism plot just for you mate. Hell your my biggest fan, dont desert me now.There's lots of nasty stuff coming in Surfside.lol |