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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-03 12:55:33 | Four Girls | Not bad, keep it up ha ha Michael |
| 2004-11-04 22:24:36 | Four Girls | Great concept, but you stopped way too soon - next time, write about a weekend of porn, not one quick fuck, or at least give us some sequels. |
| 2004-11-03 09:46:52 | Kerri | DUUUDE omfg that was a beautiful storie all the way up till the end. yeah the end sucked infact i think you should rewrite it but i give it a 7 |
| 2004-11-04 12:23:13 | Kerri | Not quite long enough, a few grammar problems, but all in all pretty good. And how they met....so accurate. 7/10 |
| 2004-11-07 00:27:50 | Kerri | Glad you like it mind telling me what was wrong with the ending? |