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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-10 09:32:18 | Kerri | Fine beginng. Good story. The end to fast and a little direct. No thrill or suspence. Sorry about spelling. Eng. is not my lang. |
| 2004-11-10 17:37:37 | Kerri | nice story man ! so accurate who they met , but the ending is tooooo fast i think .. all in all , its nice |
| 2004-12-27 18:00:22 | Kerri | you should write a story wear they fuck outside on a picnic table. this one was good but not enough sex. u are a good writer but u need to watch spelling and grammar 8/10 Bravo |
| 2005-03-06 01:29:06 | Kerri | impressive, the ending was abrupt. how old are you exactly? |
| 2005-03-24 23:15:06 | Kerri | Nice. I'd definately say two things: 1) More sex (longer and more descriptive too) 2) Grammar. Everything in quotation marks should go on a seperate line. It makes it easier to read. |