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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-04 15:39:22 | The Babysitter_(7) | i myself liked the story, things like this get my blood going even though the actual thought of doing it for real makes me sick, keep em comming great story except for the domination part, not really into that but good work A- |
| 2005-01-04 18:26:02 | The Babysitter_(7) | that was so good u are a kick ass writer please write another |
| 2005-01-04 19:17:02 | The Babysitter_(7) | Damn good :) I read all of it and its just enough everytime. Very great style ... and to all the guys, having problems with it: Its says 'first time' and 'young' ... so shut the hell up, or write a better one. I dont think ya could. Keep goin Autor. |
| 2005-01-05 11:17:42 | The Babysitter_(7) | Sapphire i have a few constructive criticisms that i hope will help you with your writing. Try not too make the writing so formal in the dialogue because it doesnt really sound natural. and unless it is what your aiming for try not to make the age of the girl so young because 11 is just a little too far. HOPE THIS HAS HELPED YOU! I gave you a 6/10 |
| 2005-01-05 16:32:27 | The Babysitter_(7) | I thought it was a good story thats all i can say |