| 2005-08-01 23:19:45 |
Kristen and the Band Room_(1)
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Yo "Fuck U All" i think u just pissed cause u lackin in size. dont be dissin other people jst because u aint big enough to get a girl off!!!!! anyway,besides that fuck head, that story was really good. i give it an 9/10 |
| 2005-08-03 14:58:11 |
Kristen and the Band Room_(1)
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The idea of the story was nice, but damn son learn how to spell. Spelling is essential in writing stories. You would spell a word one way and then spell it completely different two sentences later. Anyway, DipSet holla. ˜one˜ |
| 2005-08-13 00:07:35 |
Kristen and the Band Room_(1)
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simply put, sucky. it had an ok story line but the spelling and grammer...attrocious. not to mention the fact that you kept a steady gpa with that intellect? what was that...1.5? which would be what id rate this story but because it dont have halves i will have to settle with a 2/10...be lucky you got that...this story wouldve been good if there wasnt so much shitty spelling. oh hey Dude, you know what? its a proven fact that those who brag about their cocks often exaggerate and are insecure about their sexuality, go figure |
| 2005-08-29 16:09:53 |
Kristen and the Band Room_(1)
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good story. who cares about the grammer. i cant spell either so it dont matter |
| 2005-09-04 20:48:21 |
Kristen and the Band Room_(1)
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Hey, nice story, ignore all these ignorant people about your grammar, you just keep writing like you do..if they dont like it, TOO DAMN BAD! I liked it :) |