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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-26 23:45:16 | Kellys story - seducing my dad | nice story how about a part 2 |
| 2005-12-28 20:21:04 | Kellys story - seducing my dad | It was ok. You need to work on your writing skills like using quotes for talking that way it wont be so confusiung. Very nice though. |
| 2005-12-29 16:47:07 | Kellys story - seducing my dad | A nice story with potential, however it's pretty confusing to read. It's hard to tell which parts are the character's speaking and which parts are the stroy. Try using quotation marks (") when character's are talking. And cut down on all the capital letters. It looks really childish and it's hard on the eyes. |
| 2005-12-30 23:30:44 | Kellys story - seducing my dad | Story good. You need to write part two when her friends are there to join in. Your use of too many upper case letters detracts from the story. If you must use upper case then write the entire story in upper case. |
| 2006-01-01 00:54:05 | Kellys story - seducing my dad | hopeing to see moor on this one |