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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-28 11:39:19 | A Hard Day At School | If you were an instructor I hope you weren't teaching a writing course. Is any of this true? |
| 2005-01-28 16:33:13 | A Hard Day At School | Pulease!! Although the author had this staged for a potentionally fantastic series of tales, this story was so badly written and spelled I couldn't finish reading this piece of crap. I have no idea nor wish to know how it ended, Why didn't you break each vignette into paragraphs so it was easier to read? Don't you proof your writing? The spelling and sentence structure sucked! Go back to the third grade and start english grammer once more. |
| 2005-03-15 12:14:56 | A Hard Day At School | i smelled her sex...i licked her sex.... wtf is this???you can call it pussy or cunt or clit or whatever... i think you should look up "sex" in a dictionary and see what it really means... but i guess you, 51 year old man with your fantasies, have never had it... 2/10 |
| 2005-08-31 10:36:46 | A Hard Day At School | sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2005-12-22 19:02:49 | A Hard Day At School | wow...how bad can a story be... the bad spelling and run on sentences...paragraphs soooo long i lost my place more times...i didnt even try to finish it...please dont write anymore |