| 2004-11-27 14:47:38 |
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This guy is lame. He didn't even know what to do with the baby oil and a naked girl and he can only cum once a day. |
| 2004-11-29 01:11:53 |
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this story is just wrong that is not right bettig na girl for your pleasure. she could of filled charges on him for asualt |
| 2004-11-29 16:39:24 |
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Geez, all that for nothing?! You really need to learn how to build up and release suspense. Potential but it requires work. And it is acceptable not excepptable for crying out loud! |
| 2004-12-05 02:36:23 |
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Quite a fantasy, the only way to get laid is by blackmail...duh! Your writing is ok but use a different subject next time!! |
| 2004-12-10 21:00:34 |
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Dude this shit was 2 long..............it'd be one thing if it were a good story........ending sucked ass |