| 2005-07-16 00:39:55 |
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Dude if u gonna write a story, LEARN TO USE COMPLETE FUCKING SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!! i think u need to go to grammar class so u can learn to write a story. what did u drop outta school in 3rd grade??? i have a 2 yr. old neice and she can writte better than u u stupid piece of shit. 0/ 10 |
| 2005-07-19 17:43:12 |
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holy shit.....where are the sentences starting and ending....i didnt even finish the story. |
| 2005-07-20 15:26:21 |
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wtf dude that whole story was 1 sentence and "i could not take no more" go back to school moron |
| 2005-07-23 13:38:42 |
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wtf man! learn how to write!ur a freakin idiot man. slow down next time too |
| 2005-07-25 13:43:20 |
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hey retard what does "we have do it" mean or "she pregnant" i know someone who talks like that but he is in a wheelchair cuz he is to dumb to fucking walk |