| 2005-12-11 20:38:14 |
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i fucked a dead girl the other day |
| 2005-12-17 16:06:57 |
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I'm sorry to say, I have read much better written stories. Given that it is a true happening, your writing has way to much to be disired. I give this story a 2/10 |
| 2005-12-24 12:38:32 |
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i'll just say.......1/10......... |
| 2005-12-28 09:49:32 |
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Spelling and punctuation always helps a story along. Look into it. |
| 2005-12-28 16:19:14 |
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Yes, please, learn to spell. This has the ability to become a great story if you'd learn your grammer. 1/10 |