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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-08 06:05:29 | A boy in babeland chapter 12 | I've enjoyed this series a good deal. Well plotted, with a good mix of exposition, some romance -- the family seems to genuinely love one another -- and good, old fashioned hot sex. I wasn't phased -- or fazed, even -- by the Anglicisms, but the poor punctuation, terrible grammar and sloppiness was a turn-off. SO, I copied it into Word Perfect and edited it. Well, I've done it professionally, so I could do it one-handed Looking forward to more from this one. |
| 2004-12-12 10:44:06 | A boy in babeland chapter 12 | d story is good but limit d use of "brother & sister" thing.. |
| 2004-12-15 13:41:29 | A boy in babeland chapter 12 | I love these stories but one question comes to mind where did you get the idea for them? Maybe a similar experince or a friend bc this seems so detailed that its just down right scary but hey i over analyze everything I cum to these stories alot and love them so much. Two hard breasts up hehe.... |
| 2004-12-21 04:03:04 | A boy in babeland chapter 12 | I have been working on a story of my own. But after reading your's! I think I need two go back and put a lot on more detail into mine. Your stories are great you are (the man). Keep them coming I have enjoyed them all. 10 |
| 2005-01-05 20:53:00 | A boy in babeland chapter 12 | Da best series of stories in da world. 11/10. you could have added a bit of cum swapping action between the sisters though. |