| 2004-11-30 17:40:32 |
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I wish I had written this story myself. I have always been fascinated by initiation ceremonies, and the subtle progression in this story is masterful. Good tension and excitement kept up throughout (and that is not all that is kept up!). Keep on writing please. |
| 2004-12-01 12:27:31 |
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Dang! Cee, I only ever saw the first fifteen minutes or so of "eyes wide shut" on TV (my partner turned it off) and the only similarity I recognise is of nude women at a club. Maybe that was in my sub-concious when I fantasised. |
| 2004-12-01 12:40:31 |
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Peter, maybe that's the reason it seemed so familiar, plus the not pictured torture the gal went through when the party found out Cruise's disguise and she took his place. I liked your twists, and accept your rationale. Thanks for clearing it up. |
| 2004-12-23 23:09:25 |
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Great story, your one fuck of a writer, to bad the story was stole...... I like the movie better it was hotter, it made my gf really horny.. err the movie. |
| 2005-01-14 23:02:27 |
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makes it get hard and long and ready to fuck |