| 2005-06-16 03:27:45 |
Aunt Ruth 2
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Rud Rud Rud. Do not criticize (sp) another's grammar and spelling unless you use them correctly yourself. For example your statement "That was a good story, as i understand life, sex in the face of death, is a common (or not uncommon)" has too many commas. "that was a good story" is a complete thought. Thusly, a period should be used. And no need for the comma after "sex in the face of death". It is all one thought. The thought being that sex in the face of death is not uncommon. not that it is a common either. (you mixed up ways of saying it there if you look. or your "there was one more but i can't find. " you can't find -it-. Or you can not find the comment. Well, theres my rant for the week. Good story however. Write more. |
| 2005-07-04 15:44:27 |
Aunt Ruth 2
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This part was not as lively as the orginial, but I had to award it ten stars since that there are no half awards. Again, I hope the author was the good sense to keep up the goood words. |
| 2005-07-22 18:11:51 |
Aunt Ruth 2
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I liked it it was good,but now you got to pimp on your aunt ruth...!good luck. |
| 2005-09-07 14:50:46 |
Aunt Ruth 2
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This series is finished. I will no longer be writing on this forum. I have decided to give my life to Christ and have asked God to forgive me for my perversion. |
| 2005-12-22 16:18:21 |
Aunt Ruth 2
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GOOD! |