| 2004-12-19 02:14:00 |
Blonde hair, blue eyes
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wow shitty dialog, learn to write. |
| 2004-12-19 11:21:32 |
Blonde hair, blue eyes
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increase your vocab a little. it helps |
| 2004-12-19 12:38:21 |
Blonde hair, blue eyes
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That might just be the worst story I have ever read...learn to write and maybe I'll actually cum |
| 2004-12-19 15:15:43 |
Blonde hair, blue eyes
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Hey Give the writer some credit, if you fuck up then he or she would not write anymore and I as you will not have shit to read. |
| 2004-12-19 17:19:54 |
Blonde hair, blue eyes
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Excellent story, so hhhhooooottttttt. U gotta 10 |