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Date Story title Comment
2005-08-16 20:58:02 Blonde hair, blue eyes Ultra how many times must she say that expand your vocab and you could be a better writer
2006-01-07 08:36:01 Blonde hair, blue eyes what the fuck were you thinking when you wrote the gay ass story? and u used ultra like 500 times u crazy bitch learn some new words until then stop writing stupid ass stories that dont make sense!!!
2006-09-30 20:21:09 Blonde hair, blue eyes NICE WORK FOR A BIGGINER BETTER LUKE NEXT TIME
P.S.
LASE ULTRA
2006-10-07 11:24:25 Blonde hair, blue eyes thank god for the virgins that know how to do anything, Note: his little sister wasn't one anymore,
was she?
2007-01-13 10:41:24 Blonde hair, blue eyes seriously, yea some of the grammer wasn't great but if you hated it so much why did u keep reading to the end, to post a comment?
i actually thought it was pretty good, just needed some work.
and you probabaly should comaplin at someone about grammer when you suck at spelling

keep writing
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