| 2004-12-23 01:55:46 |
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u have got to be kidding me. i mean what kind of sucks story is this. everybody telling shit about your grammer.its like reading the worst sex story in my life. get a life |
| 2004-12-28 20:47:03 |
Good Friends.
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Dude, that was the worse story I have ever read, I didn't even fucking get off, damn it, and I was horny too. |
| 2004-12-29 10:51:50 |
Good Friends.
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Im not quite sure wear you learned how to speak but your grammer is really bad you should sirusly use spell check be for you ever submitt any thing i dint even get 1/4 of the way though it because the grammer omg it fucking sucks! Id give you a -10/10 thats a negitive a below zero 10 not a good ten a bad one! |
| 2005-01-03 02:14:24 |
Good Friends.
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I WOULD HAVE BEEN A GREAT STORIE BUT IF YOU TOOK YOUR TIME NEXT TIME LET SOMEONE READ IF BEFOR SUMITTING IT KEEP IT UP I THINK YOU WILL DO BETTER THE NEXT TIME AROUNG GOOD LUCK OH I GAVE U A 5/10 ITS JUST AN OK STORIE |
| 2005-01-03 02:15:01 |
Good Friends.
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i could have benn a littel better. but still was good take your time and if needed have someone look it over for you don't let these asses get to you. the more you write the better you get i gave u 5/10 that is not bad or good it just means you need to work alittle harder. Good luck babe :D |