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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-12 23:27:14 | Good Friends. | DUHH! Please do me a favor... Never write again! |
| 2005-04-13 23:11:24 | Good Friends. | you people leaving these comments are the fucking dumbasses, this kid wanted to try and write, so fucking what if he isnt a good writer, he got the idea out and taht all he probably cared about, give him a break you lot of asswholes |
| 2005-04-23 01:33:43 | Good Friends. | GO NH |
| 2005-04-25 08:06:29 | Good Friends. | Okay, The basic's were there, need to take your time thats all, You did okay, Don't worry too much about some of the comments written below, Even if you were Tom Clancy they would still knock you. Try again, 8/10 |
| 2005-05-04 17:34:26 | Good Friends. | Not bad. You just need proper spacing, spelling, grammar and perhaps some dialogue. Not an easy read, but a good story all the same. 7/10 |