| 2004-12-28 02:54:29 |
what did i do?
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I didn't how to rate this story, so I didn't. Very poor english and writing skills is hard to over look. |
| 2005-01-18 20:13:01 |
what did i do?
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Very difficult to read. Use paragraphs next time, and real words, such as 'you' instead of U. |
| 2006-08-01 23:09:46 |
what did i do?
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it was a awesome story hope to read another one |
| 2005-01-26 21:16:55 |
The Little Whip: College Dreams
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Again, excellent story. I love the series of the little whip. Always the same whip, always the same enlightenment, and always the same ending. *grins* Different details inside. |
| 2005-02-07 18:39:12 |
The Little Whip: College Dreams
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Fantastic! Great tension and painful escalation of desire. Kick ass. |