| 2005-05-22 03:59:34 |
The Little Whip : Housewife Fantasy
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I liked your story! It had excellent puntuation and proper grammer. No problems there and your idea was as good as the rest i just wish it had been a little longer and more detailed on the actual sex parts but otherwise great story! 8/10 |
| 2005-08-14 10:01:12 |
The Little Whip : Housewife Fantasy
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this is somehting i would love to do, but afraid to ask...ummmm |
| 2004-12-23 20:21:02 |
Familys dirty little secert
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great |
| 2004-12-24 00:33:32 |
Familys dirty little secert
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ur pretty weird man |
| 2004-12-24 13:14:24 |
Familys dirty little secert
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STARTED WELL BUT ABOUT MID WAY IT GOT STALE THIS STORY IS TOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG. |