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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-13 00:47:06 | Part 43: The Day is Here | whoops. The lindsey thing happened because i wrote this part right after i wrote the first LA Trip (parts 12-16) because originally parts 43-46 were 21-24, but i decided to bump them back and put them in flashback so i could do more college stuff, anyway lindsey is the character in LA and leslie is the character in the collegetow, i accidentally switched the names when i wrote this, something i should have avoided but its not that bad when you consider the 50+ characters in the series so far |
| 2005-06-08 05:13:08 | Part 44: Queen of the Highway | that was too damm good 10/10 |
| 2004-12-28 07:52:49 | Disco Des | Wow - 999 views, tet a score of only 5! What's wrong guys? |
| 2004-12-28 16:40:21 | Disco Des | The theme is right, I liked the setup of the sex scene. Maybe the problem is that the story is too short and also lacks the "sexyness" of your previous works. You don't build up the sexual tension in this one like before. Just my opinion, though. Don't discourage for this. I'm a big fan of you, Keep it up! |
| 2004-12-29 08:36:39 | Disco Des | Thanks...some people have complained that other stories are too long...ha, ha.! |