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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-01 00:12:25 | Fruit and Veg Girl | it was good, you just didnt need to keep stating the size of the chicks tits, made it sound tackey |
| 2006-03-27 07:00:38 | Fruit and Veg Girl | Ha, ha, ha -I can't believe that describing a girls tits 'once too oftan' could be described as tackey - on THIS site! Also I'm English. |
| 2006-04-28 03:34:12 | Fruit and Veg Girl | I think mohawkblues may have been trying to say that 38DD is not the most inspired or poetic description of a pair of breasts. I'll point out that there is a difference between a womb and a vagina, so if she had that thing in her womb, it was a loooong way up and in a place that usually isn't comfortable. For the most part, this was great. I loved the way he begged her to suck him off, and the way he got such a thrill just by watching her. I'm sure that there are stories that could be told about the six months they were together. Thanks for the great story. =Dreamer= |
| 2006-05-09 05:10:23 | Fruit and Veg Girl | As a mother of 2 I know EXACTLY where my womb is! The sentance was put in for 'effect' as was the repetition of the girls breast size. I have no real problem with 'critiques' of my stories but some people get hung up on the most mundane things. Amy xx |
| 2006-06-25 18:03:55 | Fruit and Veg Girl | dont worry about the idiots amy, i love all your stories! |