| 2005-03-03 22:41:50 |
First time is the most special
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Hey man, that was good but agreed it ended too fast, you have potential, keep it up. |
| 2005-03-12 14:53:42 |
First time is the most special
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It was really good but I find it a bit unrealistic that you could finger her with three fingers before you even had sex...I know this is all about fantasy but it kinda ruined it for me. Still, it was the best virginity story I've read so far! |
| 2005-03-24 02:32:02 |
First time is the most special
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Good story but keep writing to improve your writing skill! I support you all the way... til you come.. Ha!Ha. Keep trying. |
| 2005-12-13 10:42:53 |
First time is the most special
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i liked your story, keep it up :) |
| 2006-01-01 23:07:39 |
First time is the most special
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hey ya |