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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-24 07:57:33 | Transfer Student | Awesome!! Can't wait to hear some more fucky fucky!!! Loved it! |
| 2005-01-25 02:56:56 | Transfer Student | i agree with dp, you should run the spell-check a few times to catch correct spellings in the wrong places. such as knew, instead of new. And to instead of two. but i did love the story. it had a good plot, too. |
| 2005-01-27 12:56:44 | Transfer Student | graeat story.when is the followup coming? |
| 2005-01-27 22:05:36 | Transfer Student | Refer to "A Manual for Writers..." by Turabian, chapter three for some guidance on commas. |
| 2005-01-27 23:47:21 | Transfer Student | Refer to "Lets see you write a good story with absolutly perfect english" about bashing author's work. jk thanks for the comment...i see what you mean about my overuse of commas (when i pause to think, i sometimes put a comma...) |