| 2005-04-16 11:00:57 |
Transfer Student
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Hey the story was good. Its hard to find some plot and good to see somone trying |
| 2005-04-16 14:40:13 |
Transfer Student
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There is a part 2 out (you can find it through the author link at the top) |
| 2005-04-17 18:48:23 |
Transfer Student
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gr8 story i think steve shud have cum in a knocked em all out wi a basesball bat |
| 2005-04-17 20:43:59 |
Transfer Student
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great story i hope there is still hope that to happen to me |
| 2005-04-25 14:12:08 |
Transfer Student
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great start but i don't agree w/ the other ppl. in the comming chapters steve should kill some of them. maybe poison a drink, cut a throat, or blow up their car. just to make it have more action |