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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-29 20:45:21 | Transfer Student | Hey, this was a really good storyline. I liked the plot, and the sex scenes were pretty good as well. I must say though, that you did tend to mix up Tom's name with Steve's name...it was pretty confusing for a moment, but of course I ended up realizing what you meant. And you had some spelling mistakes, but I must say that the name mixup was the only one I can mention now. Great job, go on with the 3rd part. |
| 2005-05-31 00:45:05 | Transfer Student | you are bloody brilliant man, make part II |
| 2005-06-02 20:19:55 | Transfer Student | Aweosme movie 10/10 |
| 2005-06-02 20:42:59 | Transfer Student | Movie? |
| 2005-06-03 15:32:54 | Transfer Student | i think morfyus needs to lay off the caffine go to sleep and get a reality check, i know its fiction but still...i think it should be believable...other then that one mistake where you said steve instead of tom it was a good story...10/10...so...the way pussy put it...make the next "movie" cuz this story was fucking awe inspiringly written. Kudos |