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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-04 02:58:00 | Transfer Student | Pretty good read. . . excellent characters. One negative to complain about. . .don't get us emotionally invested in what is supposed to be a rape and then cop out by having her enjoy it. It's rape. . .be sadistic. Also, expand your characters beyond the good/bad guy cliches. Give us a twist. . .maybe give Steve a dark side to play on Adrian's vulnerability and naivete. |
| 2005-10-06 16:36:23 | Transfer Student | you spelt alot of stuff wrong, and made alot of errors, but other than that... very nice, good characters, nice storyline and such. |
| 2005-10-11 21:23:26 | Transfer Student | good job but how old r they |
| 2005-10-11 22:15:29 | Transfer Student | Thats left to the imagination of the reader on purppose... |
| 2005-10-14 18:31:21 | Transfer Student | That was hot but use spell check next time. |