| 2006-07-09 17:52:49 |
Transfer Student
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ok who ever the fuck the readers are cant speak proper engilshh i mean, well anyways good story |
| 2006-07-23 12:02:18 |
Transfer Student
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Good story man, definately look forward to another chapter. One note though, try to make sure you keep your names and pronouns straight. Good story otherwise |
| 2006-07-23 20:35:45 |
Transfer Student
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I found it quite enjoyable, great story, really hope you make a next one |
| 2006-07-26 05:34:42 |
Transfer Student
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i like who ever wrote tht i wanna fuk em bad |
| 2006-08-03 15:53:49 |
Transfer Student
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that was a good story yet it was rather confusing with witch person was who next time can you make it a little clearer that way everyone will understand |