| 2006-11-12 23:00:59 |
Transfer Student
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what the fuck...this is the worst grammar i've ever read in a story...shit man, go back to school.. |
| 2006-12-08 23:56:48 |
Transfer Student
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It's not rape if the one that's getting raped enjoys it. =x |
| 2006-12-13 23:25:11 |
Transfer Student
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U really need to go back to school. such a shit story |
| 2006-12-15 01:25:36 |
Transfer Student
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i dont care if you dont like my story, however, i'd prefer it if you told me specifics in what you dont like about it so i can improve rather than just dissing my story |
| 2006-12-17 16:30:31 |
Transfer Student
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It was really awkward to read. You need to work on the grammar and make sure your passages read as you want them to read. |