| 2007-04-30 21:15:11 |
A Second Life - 1
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I think the premise is intriguing and the story is well written. I liked it. |
| 2005-01-20 06:31:25 |
inspected more than a house
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story line seemed interesting but english threw out |
| 2005-01-20 12:46:17 |
inspected more than a house
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not long enough |
| 2005-01-21 23:01:34 |
inspected more than a house
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your story sucked, I don't really like stories where one person holds power over another. And, I hope your character gets arrested. Better pick another subject for your next attempt. |
| 2005-01-21 23:29:55 |
inspected more than a house
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ur rapist character better serve jail time |