| 2005-02-01 23:03:45 |
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i just have to say... your a great writer, for all the other stories, the hetero ones, that i decided to see how the liturature was on this one, but wow, really turned me off, like i'm brain dead, cause i personnal think gay sex, is def not for me... no offense to all the homos out there. Dude, try and write some more young lesbo, or hetero shit, cause they were super... peace out man, |
| 2005-02-20 11:55:37 |
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Yeah... that was not so bad... but too short and a bit brutal :P Nice story. I gave you 9/10 |
| 2005-02-21 11:03:17 |
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ooooohhhhhh yer that had me cummin all over my body n i wish my daad would fuck me up the ass n i could suck him off coz ive seen dirty pics of me mom givin my dad head n i wish i was my mum |
| 2005-04-10 00:18:47 |
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Awesome story luv..... I 've read all your stories and I have to say you're an amazing writer. A little bit of constructive criticism though he probably should have spent longer seducing his dad, but other than that it was great. Keep up the good work 10/10 for quality |
| 2005-06-09 11:49:39 |
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THAT SOUNDS LIKE FUN. THE SON SHOULD HAVE SOME OF HIS YOUNGER FRIENDS OVER. THEN THEY COULD HAVE A NICE FUCK AND SUCK FEST. EVERYBODY COULD ENJOY A NICE COCK UP THEIR ASS, A NICE COCK IN THEIR MOUTH AND SHOOTING CUM DOWN EACH OTHERS THROATS. |