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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-04 16:53:17 | Mystress Patience Assail (Part One) | I've read this story so many times, it's really good. |
| 2005-10-11 03:58:07 | Mystress Patience Assail (Part One) | Nicely done, but 1705? That even pre-dates the Austrian-Prussian empire. Way too early to lay old Adolph's 'master-Arian race' crap out there. I'm suprised you didn't have any references to Jews in your story. Historically way inaccurate, but some juicy stuff! I guess being impregnated by daddy would create a pure-blooded race, huh? Kind of like those imbred Buckeye fans! Go Blue!!!! |
| 2005-12-06 01:42:42 | Mystress Patience Assail (Part One) | Of course it's historically inaccurate--this pce of tripe, this absolute garbage. This supposedly grown woman writing this stuff does not even know how to spell. it is not "b-r-e-a-d" honey, it is "b-r-e-d"! They are not interchangeable spellings just because are homonymic--you know, sound the same. And, did the poor woman who was "bread" to be a "breeder" really have a daddy who was given a "hire place (rather than a higher place) in the army" Go back to school and get some "hire" learning--Particularly with regard to language, spelling and grammar before you attempt any more of this butchery you call writing. ... |
| 2006-01-31 10:22:06 | Mystress Patience Assail (Part One) | that was absolutly absolutly horrificaly terribly fuckin so much dam freakened jackassed fire outeded pile of shit!............10/10 |
| 2006-04-20 09:51:39 | Mystress Patience Assail (Part One) | haha crock of shit |