| 2005-01-21 01:48:10 |
On-line to in bed
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Correct! |
| 2005-09-21 10:57:16 |
On-line to in bed
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Do you ever proof-read your material Mike? |
| 2005-02-03 19:43:21 |
Mystress Patience Assail: Part Two
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2005-02-03 23:55:20 |
Mystress Patience Assail: Part Two
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WRITE MORE, ITS SOOOO GOOD KEEP WRITING! |
| 2005-02-11 15:58:36 |
Mystress Patience Assail: Part Two
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to many things wrong with it to write a good comment and if i did not have 32 defrint kindas of Books of vampire masquerada and dark ages i proble would have loved it but u r basing your story from that and not following the rules so i cant enjoy it i do think u r a fine writer 7/10 |