| 2005-01-22 23:23:16 |
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A+ |
| 2005-01-22 23:52:50 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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it was ok but either i just wasnt in the mood today or the start is too sprawled out for me |
| 2005-01-23 00:42:28 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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Very good story! I can't wait for the sequel... |
| 2005-01-23 02:14:36 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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Very good story. The build-up was great -- not too short, not too long. The only thing though, the intro should have revealed more about Grace -- hair color, eye color, body, etc. |
| 2005-01-23 05:02:11 |
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Good ,but need more imrovement |