| 2005-01-24 22:40:58 |
Collect! - A paper Boy's Dream
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Excellently written. This writing shows virtuosity. The pace of the description of the seduction fit so well with the way such things do, in actuality, unfold. Telling the story through the boy-lover's senses, from his P.O.V. rather than by lots of exposition shows real narrative talent. So, much of the stuff I read on this site is filled with outrageous descriptions of "12 inch" cocks and "DD" tits and other such statistical garbage. But, none of that in this nice piece. This was good because of what you did not write as much as what you did tell us so well. So well, indeed, that we could fill the blanks from our own minds, experience, and imagination. Great tale about a boys first tail. |