| 2005-07-08 00:57:37 |
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tHE AUTHOR KNOW HOW TO TELL A STORY THAT WOULD MAKE ANYBODY CUM. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORDS. |
| 2005-07-11 12:20:43 |
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cummed three times keep it up |
| 2005-07-11 20:49:54 |
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nice story and not an unlikely happening.I give it an 8/10 |
| 2005-07-12 01:29:39 |
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awesome story i love the use of my name in it and it is possible with a nice pace to it nothing rushed no rape great job but not completely worthy of a 10/10 this 1 gets a 9 from me keep it up! |
| 2005-07-18 23:05:39 |
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sorry but i disagree with these idiots. first of all, learn how to spell i mean...sole? what are you talking about a shoe? please. also it was to short to jerk to, it was good enough but it was sort of lame. it had potential with me too considering i was a paperboy about 3 or 4 years ago...but nothing that good happened, not to mention your story killed my job fantasy ambitions...lame. 4/10 |