| 2005-09-13 15:41:51 |
Twinkle in Her Eyes
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An 18 year old with zip up pajamas? Does anybody actually say manhood? The dialogue and charecterization were a little on the flimsy side, but damn, you made up for it with good sex. The story was well structured and readable. Keep writing |
| 2005-09-16 12:16:27 |
Twinkle in Her Eyes
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fuck you archaic 1/10 for you |
| 2005-09-19 12:18:11 |
Twinkle in Her Eyes
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aww I love this story I could bearly imagine every single action of it imagine the mom and the son.they re deeply in love with eachother even thats agaisnt nature but nothing will stop love and sex and sensuel feeling in huamn beings love this story thanks to the writer and looking toward to hear mre about:) |
| 2005-09-20 15:18:10 |
Twinkle in Her Eyes
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nice story 10 /10 |
| 2005-09-25 16:51:19 |
Twinkle in Her Eyes
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not bad...it wasn't the most erotic that i've ever read, and it wasn't developed quite enough to be the most romantic, but it had a great feel to it. 8/10 :-) |