| 2005-01-24 12:16:04 |
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Great story one of the best i have read on this website it deserves 10 out of 10 |
| 2005-01-24 14:30:12 |
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I agree with Jacques, very interesting, and very good. I like this line of story telling very much. Great description, very poetic and erotic. |
| 2005-01-24 14:46:33 |
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one of the best stories i have seen.
I love it, make more of this kind, plz!! |
| 2005-01-24 18:13:01 |
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an amazing job, keep this up and i agree with jacques, it should have gotten a higher score
congrads on the story
make more
peace |
| 2005-01-24 22:03:43 |
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awsum story dude ... u definately need to get that shit published ... man ... that deserves atleast a 9.5/10 on the ratings ! keep writing !
~SWEET~ |