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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-25 02:09:21 | That one day.. | I Agree with Deacon the position is Missionary. It seems that theres no TRUTH in this story. Anyhow try harder . . . |
| 2005-01-25 13:14:57 | That one day.. | sad. Truly sad. I don't know where to begin listing all of the bad things in this story. |
| 2005-01-25 22:33:01 | That one day.. | Very poor writing. No story development. |
| 2005-01-26 17:29:24 | That one day.. | Better than some of the other low-rated stories on this site, but still not very good. good story development is key, and length is always nice |
| 2005-01-27 16:40:32 | That one day.. | the story reads a lot like a grocery list. First this happened... then this... then I did this.... An idea would be to put in details.... I love hearing how people were feeling when this happened. I am sure you weren't all like "ho hum, I might get laid or something..." You were probably cumming in your shorts. I would have been. Give me some details. *grins* |