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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-01-27 08:41:52 | The new game of strip poker | It started well but i styopped reading when the trousers come off cs it was a bit repetitive! "i sat her here n took this off" "she sat her there n took this off and touched her there" and "i was close to cummin but the damn timer went off" or whatever. you should have built up to the stripping a bit more. |
2005-01-29 06:58:43 | The new game of strip poker | You must be very stupid to think anyone would want to read a story with no paragraphs. I also can guess is if I took the time to try and read it your story would have a huge amount a mispellings, and even a lot of bad grammar. Why do I say all of this? Simply because anyone so stupid needs to be told how really stupid they are. |
2005-01-30 15:12:40 | The new game of strip poker | I thankyou fo your input it, was my first story. I'll try to do better on the next one. The word stupid belongs to a child, a very angry child, but I love you anyway. |
2005-01-30 15:30:09 | The new game of strip poker | Purity, thankyou for your kind words and advice. I'll do better on the next one because of you! |
2005-01-30 15:36:38 | The new game of strip poker | by the way I can't seem to find the stories that eighter of you wrote. |