| 2005-01-28 16:04:16 |
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Just because you are trying to be an erotic writer does not preclude you from writing on a tenth grade level or higher. |
| 2005-02-01 11:47:50 |
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SP - Have you read anything else at xnxx? The writing here is far better than average. Of course like most bios, it's not as erotic as pure fantasy. But then, it's more interesting. Missy, don't let SP discourage you. Let's see some of those fiction stories you're working on. |
| 2005-08-04 17:04:18 |
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I loved it. It was a nice relief from the usual stuff you read on here. |
| 2005-09-09 15:46:25 |
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I wouldn't mind hearin about more, but you might look into a little more detail, and work on your writing a little. Other than those flaws, it was a nice change. |
| 2006-07-09 05:57:42 |
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That was an awsome storie. I wish there were girls like that in my school. keep it up. |