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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-12 13:37:33 | The Indian Maidens | i agree with biscuts weird and not making sense. |
| 2005-02-12 18:50:57 | The Indian Maidens | what a worthless piece of crap. he/she should stick to writing soap operas!!! |
| 2005-02-13 05:51:50 | The Indian Maidens | Good idea but the result is crap. learn how to write a storyu |
| 2005-02-14 15:20:05 | The Indian Maidens | BISCUITS makes some good point. more elaboration on the rape. describe why rebecca had to make it sound good. more sex. maybe more violence and try to keep the spelling mistakes down, also review grammar. otherwise excellent |
| 2005-02-15 23:43:28 | The Indian Maidens | First off... Yeah the rape was pretty weak, and wtf with the choppy story line? They all get raped then run off with the Warrior la de da? Come on it kind of left you hanging. |