| 2005-03-13 00:55:30 |
Julie and the team part 1
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Not too short, not too long. I liked it, good job. |
| 2005-03-13 20:08:03 |
Julie and the team part 1
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those who liked it and those who thought it could be better, i appreciate your suggestions for my future stories - hopefully this will be the first of many! |
| 2005-03-14 02:18:10 |
Julie and the team part 1
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It's like a long joke without a punchline. Where's the story? |
| 2005-03-14 14:03:04 |
Julie and the team part 1
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Cheap date. |
| 2005-03-14 16:04:26 |
Julie and the team part 1
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hi its great to see ur work on sex but still a story line would do wonders for u babe. keep the pen flowing.whatever great story. |